Hi Luckie,

This is a fantastic story. The tone is full of sorrow and disappointment. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The reader is wondering if the mate to this sock will be found. They will read to the last word to find out. The story is about a sock whose mate has been lost. The conflict is well defined. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characterization is fully developed and believable. The lone sock comes across as a real person. I love stories which personify inanimate objects. There is no dialogue but it is not needed here. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. The story is well structured and consistent in terms of point of view and tense. You have accomplished a great deal in just a few words. Great job.