Hi Ken,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is aggressive. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about the reasons certain conflicts have occurred and the brave people that fought these conflicts to make this world a better place. I will never forget the brave men and women who dedicate themselves to keeping our world safe and free. I am able to live any way I wish because of them. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.