Hi kaleb99,

This is a fantastic chapter. The title is enigmatic and attention grabbing. It tells the reader very little about the chapter is actually about. They are intrigued and will begin to read right away to find out more. You launch into the chapter without introduction or preamble. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the chapter. They will read to the last word. You have written about the point in your life when you realized that you needed a change in your life. The reader is delighted with the look they get at you as a person as well as a writer. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the chapter tedious. You use a formal, organized style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.