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The Fluttering  [13+]
There's only one way to defeat a villain...
by Genipher
Review of The Fluttering  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Greetings!

Wow, this was funny *Rolling* Every word had me stifling a chuckle as the goofball characters swatted at each other and panicked at their absurd circumstances like something from a TV skit. The ending was quick, simple and hilarious… and you actually left us hanging, because how did either of them get off the spaceship or back to Earth? That only adds to the goofiness of the whole thing. The names, the characterizations, the bird-people aliens, and the extraterrestrial misunderstanding of Valentine’s Day all added up to the most amusing thing I’ve read in a long while… and rated safely, too *Wink*

I’d love to know what prompted this, if anything: was it a Writer’s Cramp, perhaps? It’s always a good idea to have a word count at the top of the item. Otherwise I see nothing to improve on here; it’s a fine jolly ride and a nice little thing to read.

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *HeartT*


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