Hi Bic,

This is a wonderful essay. The title is enigmatic and attention grabbing. It tells the reader very little about what the essay is actually about. They are intrigued and will begin to read immediately to find out more. You introduce the topic by telling the reader exactly what they will be getting out of the essay. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on topic and the essay. They will read to the last word. You have examined the student loan crises in The United States from a few different viewpoints. You have done your research here. You are conversant with your topic and easily make it comprehensible for your reader. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the essay tedious. I did come across one structural issue that needs your attention:

1)The links to two of the articles you cite are not working.

You use a formal, organized style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.