Hello, AmyJo!

INITIAL IMPRESSION / OVERVIEW:

I did a whole 4000+ character review and it all just disappeared... sorry that this repeat edition will be shorter. But the good news is that I enjoyed reading your life update / blog post.

Your writing kept me riveted and I read straight through to the end.



MORE DETAILED FEEDBACK:

Happy Writing.Com Anniversary day and month! I hope you enjoy this review as a celebration of your time here and find the review uplifting.

I hope you have a good and safe move. I recommended a book by Regina Leeds ... something like eight weeks to an organized move. She's a zen style organizer. That's if you're packing your own stuff out. If you have movers packing everything, you probably don't need the book. Unless you're bored. You did mention looking for more to do. Reading is always a great option for me.

Congratulations on already finishing your first promptly poetry challenge poem for round five and on completing two year-long rounds of it already in your first two years here! That's fantastic.


I loved that your daughter bought you an upgraded membership and that you'll be with us for at least another year. Yay! What a nice gift!

I loved that your new apartment will save you from painful stair climbing and make your kids happier by being closer to the pool. I hope your move goes smoothly and safely and on schedule.

I didn't notice any spelling or grammatical mistakes (or mistakes of any kind) in your life update / blog post.




IDEAS TO MAKE YOUR PIECE STRONGER:
I would love to have something great to share here, but I think it's wonderful as it is. Well done!

I also think blog posts like this are very personal and don't need any kind of criticism unless it's specifically requested. I am generous in my ratings of such personal things, so you'll be getting five stars. I wish you all the best!


CONCLUSION:
You have a personable writing style and I enjoyed reading your life update blog post.

Thank you for sharing your time, creativity, heart, life events, and writing with the Writing.Com community!


Once again, happy anniversary month! I hope the year ahead is filled with blessings and joy for you!

May love, joy and peace be yours in abundance!
PWheeler












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