Hi dogpack,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is formal. It suits the poem and subject matter very well. The poem is about an orchid your sister gave you as a gift. The flower sounds beautiful. I love flowers and hope to have a few in my garden next year. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have not used punctuation in this poem, but this does not interfere with the flow of the poem. You have used grammar consistently here. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.