Hi Strawberry,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is full of anticipation. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about someone who has lived a difficult life but hopes to be remembered. I hope that the speaker will find peace in their life. I read to the last word to see if this happens. I loved this poem. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.