Hi Ping,

This is a fantastic piece. The title is enigmatic and attention grabbing. It tells the reader very little about what the piece is actually about. They are intrigued and will begin to read immediately to find out more. You launch into the piece without introduction or preamble. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the piece. They will read to the last word. You have written about getting inspiration for your writing from the inscriptions you read on tombstones when you visited a graveyard. The reader is fascinated with the way you gained inspiration for your next pieces. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and and making the piece tedious. You use an emotional style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.