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Review #4768929
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Gervic's Portal  [E]
A webpage about my works and writing crafts.
by GERVicious Ghoul ☬
Review of Gervic's Portal  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi GERVIC,

This is a fantastic about section of your webpage. The title is just your name and is enigmatic and attention grabbing. It tells the reader very little about what the piece is actually about. They are intrigued and will begin to read right away to find out more. You launch into the piece without introduction or preamble. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it on the topic and the piece. They will read to the last word. You have written about the events of your life which led to now. The reader is delighted with the look they get at you as a person as well as a writer. The links in your webpage all work. I checked. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the piece tedious. You use a formal, organized style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.

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