Hello, StaiNed!

INITIAL IMPRESSION / OVERVIEW:

Wow! You wrote a fantastic poem from the point of view of your precious dog Daisy.

Your writing kept me riveted and I read straight through to the end.



MORE DETAILED FEEDBACK:

Happy Writing.Com Anniversary day and month! I read this poem sometime in the past and loved it, but didn't have time to review it right then, so I flagged it for an anniversary review (meaning I saved the link to it in a special "August" file. ). I hope you enjoy this review as a celebration of your time here and find the review uplifting.

I could picture Daisy's birthday happiness and natural exuberance throughout your happy birthday Daisy poem.

I wondered if it won the Writer's Cramp that day? I hope so. It's a fun and lovely poem.

I loved the short lines that helped convey the joy and excitement.

I loved that you threw Daisy a real party with balloons and friends to join in her birthday celebration.

I appreciated the doggie humor your included. It helped personalize the poem.

I thought the animal and contest genres you selected were perfect for this happy birthday Daisy poem of yours.


IDEAS TO MAKE YOUR PIECE STRONGER:

In the spirit of helpfulness, I have one little suggestion to make your piece stronger.

If your membership level allows it, my suggestion is just to add a picture of Daisy, either to the thumbnail or in the main part with the poem. Readers, at least this one, would like to see her. It also might help you get future readers because the thumbnail picture would draw people in more on searches.


CONCLUSION:
You have a great writing style and I greatly enjoyed reading your happy birthday Daisy poem.

Thank you for sharing your time, creativity, heart, spirit, and writing with the Writing.Com community!


Once again, happy anniversary month! I hope the year ahead is filled with blessings and joy for you!

May love, joy and peace be yours in abundance!
PWheeler












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