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Teensy Tiny Tales Open in new Window. [13+]
A book of quick reads.
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         Review for entry/chapter: "Planning for Retirement" Open in new Window.
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Hi Ned,

I have a note to myself to come back and read a teensy weensy little tale again, so here I am. I am reading and reviewing "Planning for Retirement." I certainly should have read this before I retired. Your story is clever and as clear and concise as a teensy tale warrants.

The worst part of the story is the sad but true male shenanigans. I am sure it continues to some extent nowadays. Revenge is sweeter than wine. They got their comeuppance at a terrible cost but who cares when you are on the receiving end of the deal.

Just a suggestion would be the setting. The majority of people in the reading public will not know what a passbook is. It is hard to tell when the story takes place. The passbook dates it for me, but it may be effective to look at her online balance or something digitalized. Just a thought I had.

I needed a nice break and you tale provided that. Thanks for writing these and continuing to be a great place for me to take a break and relax!

Write on!
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