Hi Tracey,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is formal but tinged with joy. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about how angels are always with us. I believe in God and angels and find peace in their presence in my life. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The Lilibonelle poetic form works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. You have started the second through last stanzas with the lines from the first stanza. You have talked about the loving feeling of having angels close to us at all times. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.