Hi DWBHwriting,


This is a fantastic poem. The tone is dark and filled with anxiety. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about someone recovering from depression and finding the transition difficult. I am hoping the speaker has a successful journey to better mental health. I read to the last word to see if this happens. I loved this poem. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.