Hi Jimmy,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is filled with confusion but acceptance. This takes all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about someone who feels trapped but thinks this state will change soon. The reader is wondering if the prison is of the speaker's own making. They will read to the last word to find out. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.