Hi Elisa,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is full of serenity and anticipation. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about someone finding refuge from life's tension by playing video arcade games. I am wondering how the speaker will handle life when they have to leave the arcade. I read to the last word to find out. I loved this poem. The fox septet poetic form works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.