Hi Darken_Graves,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is filled with pain and acceptance. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about your struggle with the depressive part of your Bipolar Disorder and how you cope. I hope you keep your illness controlled and continue to live a productive life. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The poem has a unique rhyme that is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.