I observe in your poem, you can build a solid-looking story in your poems readily. It is one of the great gifts of God which can be seen rarely. Take care of your God-gifted talent. In this poem, you build a sad but attractive story. The situation can play an effective role in our psychological structure. A serious accident took place. They suffered. From those sufferings, a fear psychosis grew and that is continuing. We often can this type of unfortunate incident. It's very realistic. Write on! A Review from: "Positive Hearts Reviews Group" My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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