Hi fyn,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is tinged with sorrow and confusion. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about someone who is confused and hurt because a friend has disappeared without a word. The poem reminds me of what I am going through now with a friend of mine. I am hoping that the speaker will find a way to get some answers from their friend eventually. I read to the last word to see if this happens. I loved this poem. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.