Hi Adherennium Dr. of Phoolishness,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is formal. It suits the poem and subject matter very well. The poem tries to explain the mystical things in this world. These kinds of things are hard to explain, especially because very few of us experience the mystical. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.