Hi Spiritual Dawning,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is full of excitement and slightly frenzied. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about someone desperate to be loved, no matter what they have to do. I am hoping that the speaker will find the love they seek before they do something destructive. I read to the last word to find out. I loved this poem. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.