Hi Spiritual Dawning,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is formal but tinged with hope. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about someone who had died but is happily awaiting going to Heaven. I have a deep faith in God and Heaven. I plan to enjoy my life but will not fear death for it means being with God and my lost loved ones. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.