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Too Late -- Too Soon Open in new Window. [E]
Regrets of wasted youth at the hour of death [Rubaiyat]
by Winnie Kay Author Icon
Review by Cubby Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*CakeB* HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews" Open in new Window.*CakeP*


*Tulipp* Greetings, Winnie Kay! I am reviewing this because I am part of the Anniversary Team and today, as you probably know, is your 15th Writing.com anniversary! *Smile*

*Quill* First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way. Use what you feel works for you, and leave the rest.

*Tulipo* The Positives/What I Liked

         *Bulletv* Oh, wow. This is definitely deep. And so well written! The AABA rhyme scheme really works well here. Your rhyming is superb and does not feel forced at all.

         *Bulletg* My favorite stanza is:

That age misspent in argument,
rebellious music, dark dissent.
If I’d known then the bough was bent,
I might have been less discontent.


         *Bulletp* The above stanza reminds me of my teen years at one point. In the early to mid 70s, which was a very depressing time to be a teen, in my humble opinion. *Wink* The line rebellious music, dark dissent really spoke to me! Thank God, I managed to rise above all that, eventually.

         *Bulletb* My dad used to joke around and say, "If I knew I was going to live this long, I'd taken better care of myself." But not everyone is fortunate enough to experience a longer life after unhealthy and/or other bad choices made earlier on. Your poem tugs at my heart. *Heart*


*Tulipo* Suggestions/Comments to Consider

         I have nothing to suggest. Very good!

*Tulipo* Final Thoughts

         This is so beautiful, yet so sad. You are obviously a very gifted poet! This is impressive.

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Have a great day and...*Quill*
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