Hi JACE,

This is a fantastic poem. Tone is full of excitement. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about a performance for the whole family, most likely a circus. The reader is completely immersed in the fun and activity that is going on here. They will read to the last word. The Zaniila Rhyme poetic form works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.