Hi Evignity S.W.X.,

This is a fantastic piece. The tone is formal. It suits the piece and plot very well. The reader is wondering if the Wordeaters will cause much harm. They will read to the last word to find out. The piece is about a group of agents for the Emperor to suppress what they are ordered to suppress. The piece is narrative as opposed to conflict based. This is rare in literature and very interesting. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characterization is fully developed and believable. The Wordeaters come across as real people. There is no dialogue but it is not needed here. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the piece. The piece is well structured and consistent in terms of point of view and tense. You have accomplished a great deal in just a few words. Great job.