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 Walk with me...  [E]
Journey through forest reveals hidden treasures, life's lessons, and strength in darkness.
by Zemira
Review of Walk with me...  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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~~~ A Newbie Review ~~~
Dear Zemira ,

This is a beautiful poem where you describe and capture nature's wonder, plus the experience of these lessons to teach a reader like me.

Remarking here about the imagery, I can see myself walking through seeing these leaves filtered by light, as if jewels in these dense forests. Especially like the notion of branches holding them like crowns, creates a sense of awe, wonder and reverence for our natural world.

I had some favorite parts like "The trees teach us all about life we attest." Found it poignant, with the feeling nature itself is teacher, as this gives lessons about resilience and strength even in darkness. Removing the label that darkness is negative, there's an emphasis on where true strength and resilience is found...exercising proper caution.

Impressed with how this poem offers keen observation of nature with a deep connection through articulated nuances. Your metaphors and imagery vividly depict, could let readers walk alongside poet in the guiding enchanting language. Anyone who appreciates the beauty of nature to find solace, such as I, can soak in this poem and find something more.

From what I've seen here and your bio, you appear enthusiastic about writing, and it comes through with this poem offering its profundity and magic. The writer's execution of imagery is vivid and evocative, and should draw readers like moth to flame, to experience a lively write. Keep exploring and expressing your unique perspective—it's a joy to read!

Sincerely,

Brian
WDC Newbie
and Angel Army Reviewer
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