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A young woman seems to be very desperate to do something terrible. Reason is, she failed Ninth Grade, and now her mother seems to be abusing her, for failing that grade. Thus, she has a desperate idea - kill her mother. Will she go through with it, or not? Read to find out.

Characters
The characters seem to be interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling and grammar.

Suggestions
Elaborate more about what the mother is doing. It might add to the young woman's desperation, maybe even make her more sympathetic.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


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