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 I Can't Die Yet! --- Chapter 1! Open in new Window. [E]
The story of a girl who seeks out on an adventure to find her true love!- but as a slave?!
by Esosa234 Author Icon
Review by Past Member 'laharee1'
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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In the story, I especially like the application of mythology in a believable form. Her life has been cursed since she was birth. It was unfortunate but happened. The Fenix abused her to remain with her bad luck and always died. But She was desperate to find her true love. So she gave birth again to find her love.
The chapter ends here.
What will happen next? There is no specific indication. But, something must happen dramatically. I hope so.
Thanks for the uncommon but nice chapter.
Keep writing.

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