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 Heartbreak Open in new Window. [E]
Inconsistency, when persistent, is likely intentional.
by J. Archer Author Icon
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Review by Past Member 'laharee1'
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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It is a very thoughtful poetry that forces us to think about our social imbalance. It is a symbolic poem where the king is the ruler but not a Democratic ruler. Due to the power, that person loved to torture subordinates.
Days were going on. Inconsistency, when persistent, is likely intentional. One day, it was destroyed like a house of sand.
At last, everything had been spotted on.
A bit large but meaningful poetry.


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