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| (5.0)   Greetings, Angelica Weatherby-Star on top! I am reviewing this because I am part of "I Write in 2024" and I happened to post after your entry.  First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way. Use what you feel works for you, and leave the rest. The Positives/What I Liked I love this! What a cool prompt and title, Morning Glory Clouds. You've done a fantastic job in only eight lines. My two favorite lines are in your second stanza, lines one and two:Planes ride the wave Rolls of fluffy white  I'm not crazy about flying, but the above lines don't make it sound so bad.  In fact, it sounds rather nice! Suggestions/Comments to ConsiderI really have nothing to suggest. You were consistent with beginning each line with a capital letter, consistent with using no punctuation throughout, and your rhyming was excellent, along with the flow. Final ThoughtsNice job! I happen to love morning glories. Although, so do the woodchucks (ground hogs) on our proptery, which is very frustrating! I'll take your Morning Glory Clouds any day!  A Review from: "Positive Hearts Reviews Group" Have a great day and... K e e p on W r i t i n g ! Cubby ")
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