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 moms  [E]
mothers pls read this
by Kim
Review of moms  
Review by Cubby
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi, Kim! Welcome to Writing.com! And what a lovely poem about mothers you have written. Very nice. I'm thinking you have/had a wonderful mother role model and/or you are a mother yourself.

The only thing I have to suggest is SACRIFISES should be spelled SACRIFICES and god should be God. *Smile*

Nice work! Again, welcome!

~Cubby

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