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 Rebecca Rat's Bottle Bother! Open in new Window. [E]
A young rat gets herself stuck in an awkward position while drinking out of a coke bottle.
by Kieran1998 Author Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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A young female rat is looking for some food, when she locates a bottle of pop. Squeezing her way in, she starts to drink. However, a problem soon comes up, when it turns out, she can't get out. Will help come to assist her, or will she remain stuck in this predicament? Only time will tell.

Characters
The characters seem interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling and grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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