Hi Steve

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Positives

I thoroughly enjoyed this poem. As a fan of Edgar Allan Poe, I could immediately slip into the cadence and style of his famous "Annabel Lee" as I was reading. That's a really underrated skill when one is writing satire, and I thought you did a great job with it.


Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, this was an excellent poem that I really enjoyed. You did a great job of capturing the essence of "Annabel Lee" while still making it almost entirely your own. Well done!


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Jeff
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