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Okay, I love it, e- bike indeed. What a story in this poem... I was thinking for a minute that there was going to some reason why she was doing better than you but an e-bike never crossed my mind. The rhythm, rhyme and imagery is all found in this poem. It will put a smile on the readers face. It did mine, thank you for sharing.
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