Hi Riley,

This is a fantastic story. The tone is filled with surprise and excitement. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The reader is wondering what song has you so excited. They will read to the last word to find out. The story is about a person who gets ready to dance when a song comes on the radio for no apparent reason. The story is narrative as opposed to conflict based. This is rare in literature and very interesting. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characterization is fully developed and believable. The story concentrates on the speaker, and they come across as a real person. There is no dialogue but it is not needed here. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. The story is well structured and consistent in terms of point of view and tense. You have accomplished a great deal in just a few words. Great job.