HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews" Greetings, Molly! I am reviewing this because I am part of the Anniversary Reviews Team. First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way. Use what you feel works for you, and leave the rest. The Positives/What I Liked I was immediately drawn in by your title, Rumors, and also your item description...Don't fall victim to haters. I never thought too much about rumors till about ten years ago, when I fell victim to a terrible rumor and accusations by an employee who worked under me. I was so blindsided by this and even more, was shocked by her followers, who chose to believe her. I think this is why I decided to read and review this piece. I now have that connection to others who have gone through similar situations. I'm glad this doesn't rhyme. I feel it would take away from the seriousness of this topic. Your beginning two lines in the first stanza are perfect: Those black clouds filled with lies and hatred They float around, and block the truth And the first line of your second stanza is great, also: Those who relish in believing untruths of spiteful tongues It is a good idea, as you say, to separate yourself from those who choose to go down this dark journey. I finally left the job I loved so much. I learned that some people choose to believe the untruths. It creates drama and chaos, which I could not take part in anymore. Suggestions/Comments to Consider I have no suggestions. Final Thoughts Thank you for sharing this. I think it's good for others to know they are not the only ones who have fallen victim to untruths/rumors. It's a horrible place to be. Again, Happy 18th WdC Anniversary! Have a great day and... K e e p on W r i t i n g ! Cubby ")
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