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Review #4762574
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 Rumors  [E]
Don't fall victim to haters
by Molly
Review of Rumors  
Review by Cubby
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*CakeB* HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews*CakeP*


*Tulipp* Greetings, Molly! I am reviewing this because I am part of the Anniversary Reviews Team. *Smile*

*Quill* First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way. Use what you feel works for you, and leave the rest.

*Tulipo* The Positives/What I Liked

         *Bulletv* I was immediately drawn in by your title, Rumors, and also your item description...Don't fall victim to haters. I never thought too much about rumors till about ten years ago, when I fell victim to a terrible rumor and accusations by an employee who worked under me. I was so blindsided by this and even more, was shocked by her followers, who chose to believe her. I think this is why I decided to read and review this piece. I now have that connection to others who have gone through similar situations.

         *Bulletg* I'm glad this doesn't rhyme. I feel it would take away from the seriousness of this topic.

         *Bulletp* Your beginning two lines in the first stanza are perfect:

Those black clouds filled with lies and hatred
They float around, and block the truth


         *Bulletb* And the first line of your second stanza is great, also:

Those who relish in believing untruths of spiteful tongues


         *Bulleto* It is a good idea, as you say, to separate yourself from those who choose to go down this dark journey. I finally left the job I loved so much. I learned that some people choose to believe the untruths. It creates drama and chaos, which I could not take part in anymore.


*Tulipo* Suggestions/Comments to Consider

         I have no suggestions.


*Tulipo* Final Thoughts

         Thank you for sharing this. I think it's good for others to know they are not the only ones who have fallen victim to untruths/rumors. It's a horrible place to be.

         Again, Happy 18th WdC Anniversary!


Have a great day and...*Quill*
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