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A Review from: "Positive Hearts Reviews Group" 

Hello, Midnight Writer!

INITIAL IMPRESSION / OVERVIEW:
Wow! You wrote a fun Harry Potter-themed word search game

Your game was fun and gave me a nice break between meetings today.



MORE DETAILED FEEDBACK:

Happy twentieth Writing.Com Anniversary day and month! I found you through the Anniversary Reviews page's link to everyone on Writing.Com who has an anniversary today. Isn't that a neat service for our community? If you do reviews, I highly recommend participating there. I hope you enjoy this review as a celebration of your time here and find the review uplifting.

You reminded me of many fun moments from Harry Potter's world.

I appreciated that you included long and short words and a nice variety of other word lengths too.

I especially loved that you included quidditch and Dumbledore as search words.

I absolutely did not beat your time. But I loved that you included your time and gave the challenge.

I didn't notice any spelling or grammatical mistakes (or mistakes of any kind) in your word search puzzle.

I thought the entertainment genre you selected was perfect for this word search puzzle of yours.


IDEAS TO MAKE YOUR PIECE STRONGER:
In the spirit of helpfulness (and because of the rules of a review challenge I'm in), I have a suggestion to make your piece stronger. I'm having to dig deep for this as I really thought your piece was well done as it is though. So if you want to skip this part, no worries at all! Just move on to the next section and know that I enjoyed your poem.


The best thing I can think of is to add a thumbnail picture to this piece so it can get more attention for future readers/ game players, if your membership level allows that. Photos really help garner attention and people love them.




CONCLUSION:
You have a great sense of fun and I greatly enjoyed playing your word search puzzle today.

Thank you for sharing your time, creativity, heart, love of Harry Potter, and writing with the Writing.Com community!


Once again, happy anniversary day and month! I hope the year ahead is filled with blessings and joy for you!

May love, joy and peace be yours in abundance!
PWheeler







Positive Hearts
A Review from: "Positive Hearts Reviews Group"