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A man wanders through a hospital, trying to get to the outside. He is lost in the thought of the passing of a loved one. He remembers them, what they stood for, and what they meant. However, in as much as he misses the person, he soon learns that happiness can be found, just waiting for him to listen.

Characters
The characters seem interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
The one "Fathers" in the area around the medal should be "Father's".

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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