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 Nan Open in new Window. [E]
Little poem about missing Nan
by Luc E Fer Author Icon
Review of Nan  Open in new Window.
Review by Past Member 'ashok25'
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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What a beautiful rhyme it is! This is a wonderful tribute to Nan whom the teller loves. Unfortunately, she passed away. But, that girl, Nan, remains as bright as she is now forever in the heart of the narrator. As a lover, he just wants to hug her for the last time physically before she goes to heaven. Though she will no longer be in the material world, her memory will not be faded.
It is very emotional and can touch our hearts. We feel pain.
Overall, it's a brilliant writing effort.
Keep writing.



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