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Review #4761779
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 The Cat  [XGC]
A boy takes an interest in killing small animals but comes to regret it.
by Stink Meister
Review of The Cat  
Review by Cubby
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Rated: XGC | (5.0)
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*Tulipp* Greetings, Stink Meister! I am reviewing this because I am part of a Review Team, and I noticed you are a Newbie. Welcome! This is a great community to be part of. *Smile*

*Quill* First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way. Use what you feel works for you, and leave the rest.

*Tulipo* The Positives/What I Liked

         *Bulletv* I must confess, I was eating lunch today while reviewing this. *Shock2* Yikes! *Laugh*

         *Bulletg* I could not stop reading this! You definitely hooked me! Are you going to continue with it? I was soooo hoping it would end differently, especially after he started to like the cat, but that's not meant to be, I can see that. UGH! *Facepalm*

         *Bulletp* Excellent writing.


*Tulipo* Suggestions/Comments to Consider

         Paragraph 10: my Mother's *Right* my mother's


*Tulipo* Final Thoughts

         Great job! I hope to read more from you in the near future! Again Welcome to WDC! *Smile*


Have a great day and...*Quill*
  K e e p on W r i t i n g !
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