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 | The Cat  [XGC] A boy takes an interest in killing small animals but comes to regret it.  |
| (5.0)   Greetings, Stink Meister! I am reviewing this because I am part of a Review Team, and I noticed you are a Newbie. Welcome! This is a great community to be part of.  First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way. Use what you feel works for you, and leave the rest. The Positives/What I Liked I must confess, I was eating lunch today while reviewing this.  Yikes!   I could not stop reading this! You definitely hooked me! Are you going to continue with it? I was soooo hoping it would end differently, especially after he started to like the cat, but that's not meant to be, I can see that. UGH!   Excellent writing. Suggestions/Comments to ConsiderParagraph 10: my Mother's  my mother's Final ThoughtsGreat job! I hope to read more from you in the near future! Again Welcome to WDC! Have a great day and... K e e p on W r i t i n g ! Cubby ")
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