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My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines. HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews" THE POEM A poem about the power of a book. WHAT I LIKED The poet muses about how books can touch our lives. Great expression. STRUCTURE This is a free form poem no apparent rythme scheme. MECHANICS I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. Good use of WDC ML to increase the font and make it easy on the eyes for WDC. DESCRIPTIONS I liked: "I only supply temporary sanity in an insane life." This description touches on emotion and turns the meaning on it's head. Books are a great escape if you want to relax or just tune out of your world for a bit. Books give refuge to the soul - but what type of soul are you? It's a great verse that stimulates critical thinking. PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS The opening invites the reader in and keeps them reading. The title is simple and an honest fit for the poem. The poem is easy to read and resonates with the reader long after it's read. An Angel Army Review
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