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 Freefall -not finished - Open in new Window. [13+]
A poem about a man wishing his life had been different. - not finished -
by Sean M. H. Delaplace Author Icon
Review by Past Member 'ashok25'
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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It is a poem about a man who wishes something different from his life, but those desires of life remain unfulfilled. His waiting period never ends. It is certainly a sad incident but not very uncommon. It happens sometimes. I pray to God these incidents should be minimied.


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