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Semper Fidelis  [E]
What is love anyway?
by Amethyst Angel 🍁🙏
Review of Semper Fidelis  
Review by ScaryBee
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Note1* My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.

*Reading* THE POEM

A poem about the power of love.

*Idea* WHAT I LIKED

I liked the message, appealing to the Higher power as well as more 'human' type love.

*Star* STRUCTURE

This is free form poem. There is no apparent rythme scheme.

*Star* MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. The poem is easy to read.

*Star* DESCRIPTIONS

I liked: "Like a candle in the wind, so I get on my knees," This is in the middle of a shift of thought, but I think it hits on 2 things -- doubt about fading passion and a shift to appealing to a more? steadfast passion -- the love of God. It evokes a powerful scene and hints at deeper emotion.


*Star* PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

The opening draws in the reader well, putting them in the moment, and keeps them reading. The title is a great fit for the poem "Semper Fidelis" - Always Faithful. Heartfelt expression.

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