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Given: Jun 30, 2024 at 5:46pm
Length: 820 Characters |
810 w/o WritingML
Hi "Ink Fluttre,
This is a fantastic story. The tone is formal. It suits the story and plot very well. The reader is hoping that Seraphina's love will help Daemon. They will read to the last word to find out. In the story, a lesser celestial being falls in love with a celestial being with grace. The conflict is well defined. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characters are well developed and believable. They come across as real people. The dialogue is well done and realistic. The characters speak like real people. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. The story is well structured and consistent in terms of point of view and tense. You have accomplished a great deal in just a few words. Great job.
You responded to this review 06/30/2024 @ 10:28pm EDT
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