Hi Epic Fail

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Positives

I really enjoyed this poem. I'm a big fan of alliteration and I think you used that literary device to great effect in this poem. It made the piece read with a quick, staccato rhythm that I think really worked well with the subject matter.


Suggestions

I can't think of any suggestions for improvement.


Overall

Overall, I thought you did a great job with this piece. Well done!


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Jeff
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