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 A Bloody Mirror  [13+]
1 of multiple stories about Dante, a man dealing with PTSD & anxiety after losing his bros
by Based_Jame
Review of A Bloody Mirror  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Greetings,

I found this using the Random Read and Review button.

A surrealist and unnerving read, a flash fiction at that. I like the brevity of it and the way you describe the mirroring of the narrator’s own brokenness which drew him towards the strange evil figure, who lingers mysteriously at the edge of the story. This figure is the focus of the story, yet we see very little of who he actually is, and the consequences of associating with him are dramatic. We wonder if it is the narrator’s own demons he is seeing personified, his own voice telling him to kill. This is a haunting vignette which raises many fascinating questions about what else is happening in the greater context of your story. I may look for the other episodes connected to this.

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *HeartT*


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