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Taking the PPC4 - 52 Weeks of Poetry Open in new Window. [18+]
(Hopefully) 1 Poem a week for 52 weeks
by Adherennium - Maybe Writing? Author Icon
         Review for entry/chapter: "Prompt 29 (12th February 2024)Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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I came to your portfolio
In honour of your anniversary
and I got to read
Some jolly fun poetry.

You've dramatised an occurrence
Some of us face every day
And you've made it comical
In your unique way.

Of course, the wife would know
And they'd be in a place that's obvious
Now, I must tell you
About one little teeny fuss

That I shall make about your piece
Which is - the very last line
You've used 'trice' and 'it'
As if they ought to rhyme

My suggestion would be
To tweak that a bit
But overall you know your poem
Is a big hit!

Write On,
Sonali

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