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Review #4759071
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 Homesick Open in new Window. [E]
Defined as: experiencing a longing for one's home during a period of absence from it.
by ~Camrin~ Author Icon
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Review by Jeff Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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*Firework* Positives

I thought this was a well-written and thought-provoking piece of writing. The periodic questions you pose to the reader in the poem helps keep the reader engaged and contemplating throughout the reading experience. I also thought the second person point of view was a good choice for this type of item.


*Firework* Suggestions

No specific suggestions come to mind.


*Firework* Overall

Overall, I thought you did a good job with this poem. Nice work!


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