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Review #4758967
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 Rain  [E]
Contest Entry for OVI Poetry Contest
by Nani - Blessed Indeed
Review of Rain  
Review by Cubby
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*CakeB* HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews" *CakeP*


*Tulipp* Greetings, Nani - Blessed Indeed! I am reviewing this because 1) It's your anniversary month here at WdC (15 years!!!) and 2) I'm sort of picky about what I choose to review, but I immediately liked this piece and decided to go with it. *Smile*

*Quill* First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way. Use what you feel works for you, and leave the rest.

*Tulipo* The Positives/What I Liked

         *Bulletv* I'm always appreciative to the writer for explaining a new form of poetry, and this is no exception--> Ovi (ovee): an ancient Indian form of narrative poetry consisting of four-line stanzas with the first three lines rhyming and having eight syllables each. The fourth line does not rhyme and contains less than eight syllables. You even included the pronunciation. *Wink*

         *Bulletg* Good imagery--> Clouds angry and black rolling in, along with the sense of sound!--> pitter and patter and clatter and Silencing all else.

         *Bulletp* Great rhythm and rhyme! Looks like you followed the guidelines precisely. *Smile*


*Tulipo* Suggestions/Comments to Consider

         Now that the contest is over, you might consider replacing Contest Entry with another genre, such as Nature and/or Environment and perhaps a 3rd genre of your choice. *Wink* Just a thought!

*Tulipo* Final Thoughts

         I'm so excited I discovered this piece. I not only love the poem, but the poetry form. I plan to experiment with it, myself, thanks to you! Thank you for sharing! I hope you did well in the contest (it would not surprise me. *Wink*)


Have a great day and...*Quill*
  K e e p on W r i t i n g !
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