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The Lake Open in new Window. [E]
Entry for Verdant Poetry contest, June 2024
by Dave Ryan Author Icon
Review of The Lake  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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An old man takes a trip to a lake he used to go to when he was younger, in order to enjoy it, one last time.

There are places we like going to, for they hold special meanings. The old place, where you were a child - it was so big back then, now, it is much smaller. The school you went to - that's changed a lot. The old swimming hole you swam at - dried up when the creek's course changed. However, the memories, those tend to stay.

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A cute piece to read.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
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